tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3690176.post2793821545919083577..comments2024-03-25T10:03:00.731-07:00Comments on Bob Boze Bell's Big Bad Book of Bad Diary Entries: Slot Canyon Auditions & The Genius of Richard BrautiganBob Boze Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10884865420067145231noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3690176.post-54261658916588165392022-03-27T19:50:50.049-07:002022-03-27T19:50:50.049-07:00In your Whip Outs, I think #4 nails it. Your Whip ...In your Whip Outs, I think #4 nails it. Your Whip Outs have a looseness that really works. I like this long shot, it could set up some great closeups. Maybe a 4 panel zoom-in finishing just on the intensity of his eyes. Keep the long shots loose and tighten up your zooms...and use a lot of DUST! Some of your accidental whip outs are better than most current finished graphic novel artwork...I see Bradley Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03306181345072832908noreply@blogger.com